Wedding in the Park

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  1. ClarkKent

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    Here is a capture of a wedding that I assisted with last Saturday. The couple wanted a great view of them with in the park, and this is what I came up with. C/C welcome and thanks for looking.

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    would like to see how the shot stands on its own.
    Can you post without the frame?
     
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    Hey.... I taught you better 'n that. Put a little passion in that kiss. It looks like they're holding hands, which is nice, but I think this calls for arms around the neck.

    You placed the bouquet directly below the bride's head. I might have moved it back a little bit so it wouldn't line up so... so... directly below her head. The lines of her gown point to where I see it.

    And as much as I like what you've done with the sky, did you try a crop without it? Maybe a slight burn of the lawn?

    You chose a wonderful setting, and placed them perfectly in the frame. Good goin'!

    -Pete

    BTW.. who'd you assist on this one? I'm just being nosey.
     
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    Nice shot!
     
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    Did you use a polarizing filter?
     
  6. ClarkKent

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    I assisted SpaceNut as a second photographer. He was doing this for a co worker of his....well past coworker now that he is retired. Thanks for the helpful feedback.
     
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    And I did apapreciate the help, this is an awesome photo, and you do awesome work. Thanks!!
     
  8. ClarkKent

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    Here are a couple of changes that were made. I removed the frame, chose a different pose and also cropped one with out the sky. Let me know what you think, Thanks Pete.

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  9. Christie Photo

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    Well... I was thinking more of a panoramic scene. The bouquet placement is good! The burn on the grass is a bit more than I envisioned. I like that there's more emotion in this pose, but find his "stooping" a bit awkward.

    This is the way I'm seeing it:

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  10. ClarkKent

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    Ah...ok, now I see what you are saying. Thanks!
     
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    I dunno.... I could be way off on this.

    See what others have to say. I'm envisioning a two-page spread in the album, perhaps with some copy reversed out... maybe several smaller images dropped in.
     
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    Ok here is my attempt...

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