weed in grass shot

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  1. matt3756

    matt3756 TPF Noob!

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  2. Alpha

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    Interesting concept, but I think there's too much stalk.
     
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    I was thinking there was too much picture.

    The thing upper left is really distracting. I think the stalk needs to start somewhere else than the corner. Nice dry colors.
     
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    I think a re-shoot may be in order.
     

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