Weirwall... Thoughts..Improvements

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  1. AckleyImproved

    AckleyImproved TPF Noob!

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    Hi

    I guess the only way to learn is to have it judged by different people. Your thoughts???

    What to change... Things to do differently. Without this criticism, how can I learn.

    Thanks

    Ackley

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  2. Raymond J Barlow

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    I like the shot, .. did you take this one in a horizontal frame?? would be cool to compare.
     
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    I like this and I can't see anything wrong with it....


    Actually on a second look it reminds me of the Vienna Video from the 80s. ... maye thats just me.... a lovely peaceful mood to this ... yes I like it.
     
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    really nice picture. but yeah... I'd like to see it rather horizontal
     
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    Oh, I like this just fine as a vertical. The vanishing point really draws you in.

    I can't say too much else about it, the image itself is a bit small to tell about clarity. If you could post a larger version that would be great. :)
     
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    Loose the annoying bit of the column down the left edge.
    Crop a bit off the bottom - there is a bit of empty space in the foreground that isn't doing anything for the picture. About half of that foreground paving slap in my estimation.
    Doing those two things will tighten up on the dramatic lighting (and pull the sky out a bit more).
     
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    Print it!!! I would go with a tighter crop on the left side of the frame.
     

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