@ welcome to my dark secret...

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  1. elucidati

    elucidati TPF Noob!

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    Trying to create a dark mood...



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    Well..?
     
  2. LizM

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    Very interresting. Think you got the dark mood down. Makes me think of a freeze frame in a movie where the murderer is following the intended victim.
     
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    yeah, very scary! cool
     
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    I like it because it feels different in a way.
     
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    I think you nailed the the dark mood you were going for. It immediately gives you a menacing feeling.

    Great stuff.
     
  6. Rhubarb

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    I feel like I am looking at a ghost. I think it is a great capture.

    The only thing I can think of changing is the second person comingthrought the door. I like the feeling of the first figure being alone,and for me is the subject of the photo.

    My eye is drawn immediately to that figure.
     
  7. elucidati

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    Yup, I was also having second thoughts about the man at the door and have erased him(literally).
    I have also updated the link to show the new pic... thx rhubarb...
     
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    woo hoo!! I love it! :D Very nicely done, great feel. :thumbup:
     
  9. loopy

    loopy Brave little froggy...

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    WOW! I really like this picture!
     
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    Very nice capture. I wouldn't change anything.
     
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    definately scary :hail:
     

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