well another boots pic...

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  1. black94sol

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    ok i dunno if i got it this time, but how could i improve this. you should have saw the original. had all kinds of crap under the stairs that i got rid of. personally the top looks blown out, i couldn't figure it out. someone help.

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    actually now looking at it, maybe a tighter crop, since my editing looks like crap
     
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    to me, the boots feel too high up in the picture. I do like the idea you got here.
     
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    i'm uploading a new edit now...i'll post it when i'm done
     
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    Personally, I love it!
    Brings up so many questions. Who's boots are they? Why are they just sitting on the stairs?
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    And then from there I create my own story as to whos they are and why they are sitting on the stairs.

    I like it :wink:
     
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    For me it feels like the picture is taken too far off center. It is a cool concept though, it has great textures and good tonal range!
     
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    thanks, i'm going to upload the color version too
     
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    ok looks a little too over saturated, but here it is
     
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    I really like the second photo in the black and white. I like the angle you took with this one. Good job!
     
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    i definatly like this image. it has a nice old fashioned 50's coal miner town feel. it really makes you wonder what happened as neea said i would crop it just a little bit more on the right but thats just me.
     
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    I like it of course elegant in its simplicity... I do think verticle crop though...
     
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