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  1. Holy Ghosted

    Holy Ghosted TPF Noob!

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    does this hold your att. or does it leave you looking for more. please give me your full opinion


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    Frankly I find a couple of things distacting. He is floating in the air (no feet) and I wonder what is on top of the tower. the other is the overall brightness but that might be just my monitor.
     
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    is it too bright I am on a new monitor so I am getting use to it and I am trying out lightroom so I still trying to figure that out as well all on a new computer so I will be testing alot I will see if I can fix some of it but I think that is the total frame
     
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    My monitor is crap so I have no idea just looks that way to me on it. n i copied it and took it down a couple of knotches exposure wise and it has some really nice shodows.
     
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    I think that the lighting is too harsh and the building isn't straight.
     
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    Well hell lets jack that sucker up and put some blocks under it.
     
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    Its slightly interesting, but nothing too much. The image is also, at least for me, slightly crooked.
     
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    ya I did not notice it being crooked until some one said so that is one of the reasons why I started posting my photos here so I know what to look for before I push the button :wink:
     
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    The color comes out pretty good for me - but I would like to see it with his feet and the top of the building.
    Mahalo, Kristen
     
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    Here it is straightened. The jacks weren't necessary. :wink:

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