well how am i doing

Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by starfighter1953, Sep 1, 2008.

  1. starfighter1953

    starfighter1953 TPF Noob!

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    looking forward to all of your help.thanks in advance.1. [​IMG]2. [​IMG]
     
  2. tirediron

    tirediron Watch the Birdy! Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Comments, per req:

    1. I think this image would be improved by cropping out some or all of the immediate foreground and heightening the sense that the viewer is 'flying' over the area. A slight levels tweak will clear up the haze in the image as well.

    2. Perfectly exposed and focused, great detail in the rock, but I think it would do better if you had a little more of the surrounding area; right now you have to look closely to see that it's anything more than a large rock.

    Overall nice work and good effort, looking forward to seeing more.

    Just my $00.02 worth - your milage may vary.

    ~John
     

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