well, i did my model photo shoot...

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  1. cosmoepic

    cosmoepic TPF Noob!

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    thanks to everyone for helping me get through this stressful shoot

    (it was my first)

    anyways ive included the link to the 5 shots from the shoot, please check and tell me what you think

    i know posting links is "taboo" but i felt for this one it would be easier


    Emily and her bowl of ice cream - a set on Flickr

    thanks! i think it came out awesome
     
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    They look alittle on the blown out side.....
     
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    Big Mike I am Big, I am Mike Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Looks pretty good, well done.

    The only problem that jumps out at me is that the ice cream is overexposed.
     
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    yeah it was tough shooting the ice cream, ive never used lighting or anything

    i kinda wanted to blown out look i think it fits the shoot
     
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    Bigpopa TPF Noob!

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    Oh ok I gotcha now........
     
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    I think it's good work. I won't deign to criticize as of yet, because I'm "just not there yet." I like the setting and the idea of the shoot. Great setup!

    One question though:

    Did she REALLY eat all that ice cream??? :lol:
     
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    haha no she didnt, i tried to get her to but she wasnt havin it!

    thank you for the kind words, it was my first portrait shot and i couldnt be happier and she was super excited about it too
     
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    That corner in the wall kills it for me. Chop it out if you can. Or not if it doesn't bother either of you.
     
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    i wouldn't say it kills it for me, but it is a bit distracting. that's my only complaint though, other than that they look good
     
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    thanks! for some reason i kind of like the corner, but i see what you guys are sayin, ill try to do somethin
     
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    Just out of curiosity, what was the goal of the shoot?
     
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    I really like the shots. Great idea of using an edgy model, with something as wholesome as icecream. I really like that contrast. I agree that the icecream is a little blown, but like you said, it was your first time using lights. Good job!
     

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