Wetlands C&C Please

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  1. Josh220

    Josh220 No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Thanks for looking, C&C welcome!
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  2. JamieR

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    Love the first photo, well composed, nice colors and vibrance. I think it could do with a little less vignetting, and maybe crop out some of water towards the bottom, so the overall photo is longer, to give a panoramic feel to it. Very nice photos.
     
  3. Josh220

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    Thanks!

    Here's a crop w/ less vignette as you suggested.

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    So pretty :drool:
     
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    Nice shots - though I think the horizon in #1 is slopping down to the right - maybe straighten it a tad? #3 and #4 i'd prob crop a bit of the sky so the horizon isn't so central
     
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    Thanks for the suggestions!
     
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    Here are the revised versions:

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    I think the edits look allot better :thumbup:
     
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    Thank you :mrgreen:
     
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    Edits look much better:)
     
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    Someone has a dirty sensor!
     
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    Had to look but yes the dust bunnies have visited
     

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