I think its a cute shoot, needs to be a lil lighter maybe some editing in PS heres what i did for you in PS. Hope you like it, it says its okay for me to do. But PS can be your best friend. =D
To correctly expose the whole image, you're either gonna have to use an ND Grad or take several images with varying exposures (some exposed for the foreground, some for the sky) and blend them in PP.
Yea - you exposed for the sky in this one no? There's just too much light up there, so not even the fastest settings the camera chose could bring the detail out so you get a spotlight in the clouds, and nothing in the foreground.