Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by Axel, Dec 23, 2004.
The dark part above is reserved for Merry X-mas...
It's good. I don't see anything wrong with it except it doesn't really do anything for me.
With some good font/color choices I think you could really make a nice greeting though.
i think you need at least a little bit more light... kinda hard to distinguish what it was at first glance
I still don't know what it is...is it rings??? Or candle holders??? Just not to sure about this one really....
Dark part is reserved for merry xmas? <~ Confuzzled.
Also, I can't tell what it is either. Perhaps an ornament?
Looks like a gold wrapper to me. *SHRUG*
WTF is it?
Part of it looks like a skeleton's ribcage to me? Is my monitor that dark?
Very nice, it gives me a shudder of warmth the first time I look at it. Who cares what it really is, the light from the subject made me smile and it is vaire vaire christmassy.
It's a good idea, but I agree that it's very hard to tell just what it is at first. Maybe if the candles were slightly more separated, and you could see at least one of the wicks with the flame, it would be nicer?
sorry, doesnt work for me. how is that in some fashion christmas related?
I like the idea of the candle holder. The light on the left is distracting, however.
I'd love to see a human element added though, maybe a hand, maybe a hand lighting the candle..?
I have been looking at it for several minutes now, but I still haven't figured out what it is.
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