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  1. lalo56

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    feel free to give cc

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    Thanks. I will keep that in mind.
     
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    mishele Moderator Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Just somethings to keep in mind.......Please don't take this link as a say all!! Rules are made to be broken but that being said it will give you a nice idea of what makes a nice picture.

    Learn and then break them as much as you want!!!
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    Cool thanks. I will read that as well as getting a magazine i saw and liked, named Photography.

    Yeah sometimes i may capture something that motioned me to and may not others.
     
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    Edit version... Is this one better?


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    Nice bird... and your edit did improve the color saturation, but I think you can improve more with what goes with the main subject. As in.. background and what the subject is leading to.

    #3 nice DOF i think... but what is that box ?

    #4 overexposed... -1 or -1.5 exposure comp. ?
     
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    Thanks. He was not leading to anything just a bit weary of the camera. I do understand. Every comment helps me improve.
     
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    I just got a baby conure several weeks ago and still havent a decent photo. Big difference when you got this big lens in play.
     
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    I love Conures, nice colors and good birds if you spend alot of time with them. Like any other bird i guess.
     
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    I like the picture of the bird. The cage in the background is a little distracting. If you could get closer to it and use a shallow depth of field (large aperture) I think the image would be even better because it would isolate the bird from the background.
     
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    I agree with you. My fiance was taking these pictures. With what little i taught her with the little know... I think she did good. With a little Light Room work makes for a better picture for some. The flowers are over exposed, but can be fixed. I just dont want to try to.

    #3 is a bird feeder. Not a good shot since obviously did not appeal you.

    4# I agree...

    Thanks for your CC. We both will learn.
     
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    BuS_RiDeR No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I think the edit of the bird is quite an improvement. The bird is my favorite of what you posted... However I feel that it might benefit by a recrop... So only the bird is in the frame... The orange thingy is distracting my eyes a bit. But maybe thats just me.
     

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