what do you think?

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  1. shorty6049

    shorty6049 TPF Noob!

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    heres one i took today, as usual, please tell me whats wrong with it, and whats right with it. thanks!
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    whats wrong: I dont sense much of a subject, it isn't immediately obvious that it is a stair case. Maybe Im just slow though :lol:

    Whats good: Great contrast, it looks very nice. Diagonals everywhere, very dynamic.
     
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    i cant tell what the mysterious white powder is, and it seems to be attracting alot of my attention

    i agree with saying the contrast and diagonals are very nice

    now if you dont mind my thread hijack...you have a striking resemblance to colin meloy of the decemberists :mrgreen: i hope you havent been told that too many times...
     
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    Is it me or are the railings out of focus? Well, other then that I like the angle.
     
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    umm.. the railings MIGHT be out of focus, i also added a diffuse glow filter in photoshop, the white powder i think was ice-melt salt stuff, and nobody has told me i looked like colin meloy actually.... by the way, i dont usually wear the 1920s mustache and huge sideburns... haha , that could be making me look a little different...

    thanks for all your comments!
     
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    any other thoughts on this??
     

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