Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by josh2449, Sep 26, 2004.
Just a quick PS. I'm gonna do a better one when I get some time.
It says you take a nice shot. Well done mate.
It says "with deepest sympathy" to me. Would be great on a sympathy card.
Thanks for comments guys. I did another one, better than the first, but still not as good as I would like it to be.
It looks like the flower is trying to look at itself as though in a mirror and the shadow is the reflection. The brighter area in the upper right corner is distracting for me, but I like the idea.
Yea, LizM, that's my take on it, too.
it says: "the world can be colourful"
Seems sad to me. Like lookin in a mirror but not seeing what you want to see, or seeing the whole (color part) of you, or only seeing the bad things.
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