WHAT HAVE I DONE?

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  1. nikon90s

    nikon90s TPF Noob!

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    LOL, I just think that is a funny title for a Wedding Pic. He is really happy with her!!!! Anyway I plan to crop the person on the right out so forgive me I know she needs to GO. but other then that what do you think?

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  2. ksmattfish

    ksmattfish Now 100% DC - not as cool as I once was, but still

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    I really like it.
     
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    molested_cow No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I kinda think the guy is too dominant. Plus the general color is black, which makes it really heavy on the left. If the bride could be more towards the right, it can help to balance the composition.
     
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    nikon90s TPF Noob!

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    Here is a better crop.

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  5. hobbes28

    hobbes28 Incredible Supporting Member

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    Oh yes. The cropped version speaks a million words. I like it. It reminds me of my wedding day.
     
  6. simnine

    simnine TPF Noob!

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    you might even photoshop that little white spot in his hair. My eyes are drawn directly to it. but then again... I am sometimes wierd like that. :p
     
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    cso TPF Noob!

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    Love it.

    I'd even crop out the bottom of the frame raising it to mid shoulder/bottom of her hem...
     
  8. aggiezach

    aggiezach Yup...

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    I like it a lot as well. I agree with Hobbes, the cropped version speaks volumes about the situation! Great idea! :D
     
  9. Lula

    Lula Cracks-Up At Crazy Titles!

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    Ditto
     
  10. Walt

    Walt TPF Noob!

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    The cropped version is much better. Good exposure. You can even see the seams on the back of his jacket.
     
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    DarkEyes TPF Noob!

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    Gotta Agree with you there. That white spot is a Visual Magnet.
     
  12. Digital Matt

    Digital Matt alter ego: Analog Matt

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    I might have stopped down my aperture a bit more. I like the dof effect, but it's a tad too much I think. I'd like to see a bit more detail in the bride.
     

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