What was she thinking!?

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  1. Jankster

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    took this of my little sister thinking about whatever 13 yr olds think haha. i liked the way it turned out. CC is welcome thanks for looking!

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    you captured a genuine expression, that's the good part.
    the light seems harsh. too much contrast in pp?
    with her left side cut off and a distracting bottom right background composition
    is not pleasing to the eye.
     
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    thanks for the comments. i agree the bottom right is a little distracting but i composed it like this to do something a little different. if she was fully in the frame it would be boring for me...idk. i wasnt really going for that look...and yes it was shot in broad daylight so the lighting wasnt the best
     
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    i would've liked more hair behind her head rather than in front, but it's a great capture nonetheless!
     
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    I like the shot, like the contrast, maybe I would crop more on the top of the photo.
     
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    What do I want to be when I grow up? There's a new usher albulm coming out?
    Would my brother get this camera off in front of my face?

    E=MC2 Just kidding I love this picture what I would've liked to see is more of her and a little bit more of the image to the right squared for a greater dof
     
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    interesting expression
     

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