What's wrong with this picture(s)?

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  1. Soulz3urn3lack

    Soulz3urn3lack TPF Noob!

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    Considering I took this with a Easyshare z650 it's pretty decent. Can anyone with an eye for flaws tell me what I could have done better in this picture(s)?

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    Was it on a tripod? - TF
     
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    to me the colors just look dull and softened, kinda like theres a hazy filter over the lense

    if that makes any sense lol
     
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    looks a lil out of focus to me
     
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    pic 3 the edge of the table in the frame is a bit of a distraction. It could be cropped out or more table cloned into that space.
     
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    I'd say that the first is the best. The composition's not bad. Not quite enough DOF there, there are parts that are too soft. Also, the BG is quite distracting. I find that for close-ups on flowers, a soft green BG works best.
     
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    All seem OOF.

    Looks like the bloom of a Tulip-tree which bloom in June here.
     

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