Where does the time go?

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  1. captain-spanky

    captain-spanky TPF Noob!

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    now.. i think i've gone a bit overboard on the border.. in fact, i don't think i like it.. and i'm starting to think its all leaning a bit to the right but what do you think? :confused:
     
  2. Nikon Fan

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    I love the shot and tones, but I agree with you the border is really distracting. The shot stands alone without a border, so maybe just go for a simple plain one if you feel the need to have a border :) Great shot though!
     
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    I like it as well, but as you mentioned, I think the border is a bit distracting. I like all the "elements of design" in the photo even though it isn't really a "design" photo.
     
  4. Jeff Canes

    Jeff Canes No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    could use a little grain
     
  5. mentos_007

    mentos_007 The Freshmaker!

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    wow... the border is ok but I'm amazed by the amount of details on the fasade of the building!!! lol that's great!
     
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    Yep.
    Yep.
    Fantastic photo overall; I think you've already nailed the 2 things holding it back. :D
     
  7. Time to Get Moving

    Time to Get Moving TPF Noob!

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    You could try to make the border a little sharper, but tone it down a little bit.
    Good shot though!
     

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