Where's Mommy?

mentos_007

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Hi. So here you have... my firs b&w ... what's more... first of my street photography. :) Critique please :)

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aw, poor thing. i feel sorry for her

the space around her conveys the feeling of her being lost and alone.
really nice tones too, i like this photo
 
I agree with JohnMF nice tones, but would have applied the rule of 'thirds'
Possibly vertically, definitely horizontally
 
Raymond J Barlow said:
I think the 3rds concept is applied perfectly myself, hor and vert. Am i missing something?


The subject is occupying half the picture horizontally

I think it would look better with more empty space to the right of the photo, creating a greater sense of being lost



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this pic makes me remenbering my childhood~~makes me smilling~~~
good work!!!:)
 
Strong photo!!! Kid photos seem so much stronger when they are not being cute. I think the photo is well composed. I get the feeling of abandoment and "where's my mommy?". Good job on the exposure. Maybe kick in some contrast to add to the starkness and confusion.
 
i think this is a great capture! The picture seems to be gray rather then black and white (on my monitor).

I would play with contrast in photoshop a bit to give it more "spike"

As for the crop, with the title and the emotion the picture brings, I would love to see more vastness (is that a word?) around the child, but this may not have been possible.

Great capture!
 
Mentos....Im shocked...this is fantastic....wow....really...mentos my hats of to you girl...this is one of my fav from you....congrats!
 

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