Which one?

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Which do you like the most?

  1. #1

    4 vote(s)
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  2. #2

    2 vote(s)
    33.3%
  1. LittleMan

    LittleMan TPF Noob!

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    Which one of these is better and why?

    #1:
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    #2
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    Thanks for your oppinion! :)
    -Chris
     
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    definitely the second one. just the subtle change puts so much more emphasis on the main subject.
     
  3. JonMikal

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    Chrisy Chrisy Chrisy, tell me you thought you were in the general gallery ;) if you can't, i'll be happy to provide you a link to the 'guidelines' page.
     
  4. LittleMan

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    Critique: A critical discussion of a specified topic.

    no, actually I put it in the Critique gallery because I wanted some actual Critique as to which one is better, and why...
    I knew where I was Jon... :p
     
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    then tell us which one you like best and why or what you may be struggling with. also, for the readers benefit, explain how you achieved this look.
     
  6. LittleMan

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    Very well.
    I chose to re-do from the #2 because I felt that the Trolly was a bit washed out and needed to be exposed more (even if that meant more grain)
    I also tinted it green(slightly) so it would break it up a bit and bring out darks and make it look like it has more deapth.
    I removed a few of the annoying scanner marks (IE. the little strings in the rear window and in the middle of the sky directly to the right of the Trolly)
    Also, I made it larger(not that it matters for the look necessarily) so I could print it later on instead of only having it websized.

    The way I got the look was purely photoshop.
    I started out by scanning the film Negative on a normal flatbed scanner at a very high res. (since the image is so small) I scanned it with the top down on top of it like you would a normal image.
    Then I took it into photoshop... inverted the colors(making the negative positive) and went on desaturating it and burning/dodging where it needed.

    Hopefully that explained it well enough.

    Now, all I would like to know is:
    Which do you think is better for this older look?
    Do you think I should still work on the #1 to make it more washed out?
    Any thoughts are welcome! :)

    Thanks.
     
  7. becca

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    I like the second...there's something more eerie and old and moody about it that I find really appealing.
     
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    :mrgreen:
     

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