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  1. Shan

    Shan TPF Noob!

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    I will be appreciated for more opinions~~ :D ;) [​IMG]
     
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    Shan TPF Noob!

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    I just feel unconfortable about the light~~~I think the light is too flat on the pic. Unforturnately, I can do nothing on it~~~My DC is totally atomatic~~~:(
     
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    I didn't know if you wanted this in the critique forum or not but I put it here. Let me know if you want it in the general gallery.

    I like this picture ideally and the light, although a little harsh, doesn't really take away from the picture. The only thing that really hurts this picture is the shadow in the front middle. I don't know if that's your shadow but any time I look at it, it's your shadow in my eyes. Other than that, I like the composition and the layout has me looking around the picture for more. Good work!
     
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    That's all right~~that's what i want! Thank you so much~~~hobbes!!!
    I do not know how to delete a wrong thread~~~
     
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    That's what we're here for. ;)
     
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    Shan TPF Noob!

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    thank you very much for your opinion~~~!!! hobbes~~~
    The shadow is my shadow~~~The original pic of this one has the longer shadow on the pic~~~I have already cut most of them off ~~~may be not enough!
     
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    great title! exposure looks good to me, but i agree the shadow needs to go as well as the border; both are a bit distracting.
     
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    :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen: Joh! I am very happy to hear you like my title!!!
    Maybe I can use PS to delete the shadow
     
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    Scott WRG Editor King of Smoothness

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    I agree with Hobbes, the shadow caught my attention and was generally distracting. Other than that I liked the picture. :thumbup:
     
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    mentos_007 The Freshmaker!

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    I love the title.. this is actually a very good photo because it shows something deep. good job!
     
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    I really love the photo too Shan. The colors are great. I agree with Jon Mikal about the border though. I didn't notice it until he mentioned it....hehe...but then it bugged me. Otherwise really wonderful photo and title.
     
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    Its not bad, I don't really like the excess on the right side though,
    but hey, personal pref....I don't think that other shadow from the guy, looking at the......wall should be there.
     

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