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  1. santino

    santino TPF Noob!

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    I'm curiousm I'm bored, what do you think?

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    Contax 159 & Yashinon f50/1,4 @ 1,4 and Tmax 400.
     
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    Personally I really like it... I think it's a really good shot with some good DOF control. The only improvement I would suggest is that one out of focus ball that looks like it's closest to the camera. I don't think it serves a purpose in the shot so I'd crop or clone it out. Other than that... very :thumbup:
     
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    thanks :)
     
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    For me, way too noisey and the front needs to be removed. Soz.
     
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    I think the 1.4 might be overkill due to how close the bottom of the frame is. The picture almost seems split between the top part, and the part below the hand.
     
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    The ball in the front seems to be distracting. Maybe try cropping it out.
     

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