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  1. DarkHaven

    DarkHaven TPF Noob!

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    picture taken with a beat up minolta z10 caught my eye though please any c&c welcome shot in black and white exposure time 1/250sec f 3.4 iso 100
    window light
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    DarkHaven TPF Noob!

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    34 views and no replies that bad?
     
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    Honestly not muh there.
    Highlights are to bright and shadows are to dark.
    Try working with a little more even lighting.
     
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    window lighting tried to get it to form itself evenly and through out but it wouldn't listen :D
     
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    It's too soft for me. Try sharpening it a little, and maybe do a re-take without the shadows. I'd love to see a second try on this, it has potential.
     
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    Thanks I iwll try again waiting for the sun to come back out i took it with my old Minolta want to try it with D60 the next time thanks a lot for reply
     
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    i think its a bit overprocessed.
     
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    Original
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    It wouldn't listen because forming the light is the photographer's job.
     
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    I like the lighting effect, it works for me
     
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    I like the original a lot better than the processed one. It seems more natural or something.
     
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    I think it would have been better if you had used a simple flash fill to make the lightining even. Any how nice composition.
     
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    Thanks for everyones replies i appreciate them very much gave me a lot of pointers and ideas new to this so any help i can get is great thanks again
    Brad
     
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    yeah, original is better to me
     
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    I like what you did, but the shadows are too dark on her face for my taste. I love the softness you created with it though. Very angelic. :) But work on the highs and lows a bit more.
     

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