Wifey Pooooo!

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  1. ClarkKent

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    Well, for the first time in a long time...my wife and I went out all day just traveling the town taking pictures. We stopped at the train depot to take a look, and I decided to snap a few of her. C/C welcome and thanks for looking.



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  2. Opher

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    Love to look of the border. (dont usually like them)

    Looks great but the face looks a little out of focus. (May just be the upload)
     
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    Not to be rude, but I was under the impression this forum was for paid jobs?

    Anyway, it's a nice portrait although I don't think the border adds anything except distraction. Also, she seems out of focus?
     
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    I think there is way to much empty space above her feet, and the important parts of her body (torso and head) feel like they're barely in the frame.
     
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    Yes, too much distraction. Are you selling your wife...... ? pictures ?
     
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    All around this is a great image but it is a terrible angle. Her face looks all distorted from hanging upside down. This would have been a much better image if you had gotten a better angle on her face.
     

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