Will you accept it (5)

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  1. iBats

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    So thinking of doing a semi-romatic prom proposal with the heart shaped flower photo "Was out photographing beauty in nature, I came across this and it reminded me of you" kinda thing.

    Anyway 5 shots from today, what do you think?

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    I like all of them, but for asking someone to prom, my favorite is the last one! It definitely looks like two hearts, and the pink against green is really bold!
     
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    Cross 1-3 off your list. 1 is a great shot, but you lost focus in the bottom of the frame... too small of an aperture... 2 and 3 are boring, either way, none of those shots are going to get you laid. 4 and 5 have potential, but if you are going to use them as pickup lines...you need to make sure that the subject has meaning.... Specifically, make certain she sees what you see.

    If I were you, I'd take #4 and crop out the single flower in the center... It would clearly represent a "heart", and she would be sure to pick up on it. Just make sure she doesn't see the other two flowers in that shot.... They look WAYYYYYYY too much like vaginas (oops, did I say that out loud)

    Good luck! And remember:

    Don't be silly, protect your willy
    Cover you stump before you hump
    Before you attack her, wrap your whacker.
     
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    I really like number one and four. Number one looks all lonely and cute, and number four is pretty cool.

    I think you should go with the first one, its really cute.
     
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    lol whut
     
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    Common, lets cut through the BS.... the only reason you are trying to be "romantic" is because you want your willy to get wet.

    I, as well as many others here (including the women), have been there done that.

    Do you want a critique on your photography, or do you want to know how to make your prom a "memerable" experience?
     
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    After reading this, I have no doubt that there is a village somewhere that has lost something. Grow up little boy!!!!
     
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    Bout as real as it gets! We don't grow up, we just get older, bigger (and still play with our toys (not that meaning, you know, cameras and whatnot)).
     
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    critique on my photos would be nice, also, im not an ahole so i dont really go for the trickery ****
     
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    I like the color in all of them, but feel the composition is weak. I seem to be saying this alot, but I think it is a valid criticism: in the first photo, half of the frame includes blurry sand. That doesn't seem like a good use of the frame. Was there a better way to frame the shot? Why did you choose to orient the camera vertically instead of horizontally (which seems like a natural choice given the subject)?
     
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    im not going to lie i laughed. but i do understand that you want this to be about the pictures and not about a joke.

    as for the pictures. i like one and four. more four
     
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    #4 is my favorite. #5 has potential.
     

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