window and wall

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  1. The_Traveler

    The_Traveler Completely Counter-dependent Supporting Member

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    Wall and window in Siem Reap, Cambodia
    closest town to the temples at Angkor
    taken with 18-200 vr

    Camera Model: NIKON D200
    Image Date: 2007:01:14 23:51:29
    Flash Used: No
    Focal Length: 22.0mm (35mm equivalent: 33mm)
    Exposure Time: 0.0063 s (1/160)
    Aperture: f/5.6
    ISO equiv: 250
    Exposure Bias: 0.67
    White Balance: Auto
    Metering Mode: Center Weight
    Exposure: aperture priority (semi-auto)


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    The_Traveler Completely Counter-dependent Supporting Member

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    OK, I give up. I finally posted so people could take a shot at me and no one does.
    Is it too easy?
     
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    PNA TPF Noob!

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    OK, here goes......

    Crop out all but the window (leave a border) .....the grill design might just be an interesting geometrical design.
     
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    I love the colors Traveler. Your perspective is off though. (I'm bad about that too.) Try a perspective crop and I love it.
    Hugs,
    Cindy
     
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    Bitchin' shot.

    I see the same problem I seem to suffer- no focal point/point of interest, or 'thing' to look at.

    The little couch-coaster-wheel comes close, but needs something bigger. Would like something to study, or a hook or something.
     
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    This is the best I can get after 20 mins of fiddling. Nothing is straight or square in that country - from the construction to the police.

    Abraxas and PNA, thanks. You're probably right about the object of interest, I was hoping that the geometry and color would be enough - but I guess not.

    Lew
     
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    Second look.

    It does carry well. While it could use a focal point (object) it would still look great as a print in a frame.

    I think the slightly out-of-kilter look is fine, especially if that's the way the country is- Character.
     

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