Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by invisible, Mar 28, 2009.
Images deleted. See post below.
As a result of feedback received on another forum, I re-edited the images from scratch.
2b (brown and white version )
2bII (another brown and white option)
I like the tone of brown better in the last one, but I think there's not enough separation between the shutter and the brick...
Looking for C&C, if possible.
sorry, they don't bring me a message, no interesting points for me to look at first and i think that none of the colors actually fit... i think less saturation for #1 and it may have potential..
This is the risk of trying abstract compositions; some work for some people, some don't... I'm certainly not trying to convey any particular messages –other than an invitation to lose yourself in an image for a moment.
Number 1 is actually desaturated a bit, but it might work better with even more desaturation.
I appreciate your honest feedback.
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