Window Sills

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  1. invisible

    invisible Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    Images deleted. See post below.
     
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    invisible Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    As a result of feedback received on another forum, I re-edited the images from scratch.

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    2b (brown and white version :))


    2bII (another brown and white option)


    I like the tone of brown better in the last one, but I think there's not enough separation between the shutter and the brick...

    Looking for C&C, if possible.
     
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    sorry, they don't bring me a message, no interesting points for me to look at first and i think that none of the colors actually fit... i think less saturation for #1 and it may have potential..
     
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    This is the risk of trying abstract compositions; some work for some people, some don't... I'm certainly not trying to convey any particular messages –other than an invitation to lose yourself in an image for a moment.

    Number 1 is actually desaturated a bit, but it might work better with even more desaturation.

    I appreciate your honest feedback.
     
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