Window to the Past

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  1. ccd333

    ccd333 TPF Noob!

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    Historic mining remants near Leadville, Colorado
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    i like how you framed the scene within the cased opening while maintaining a good exposure and DOF.

    did you leave your mark behind? :wink:
     
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    I agree with jonmikal, this looks like a very tricky exposure that you caught well. Only thing I would like to see is the full frame of the opening on the left hand side of the photo. Nice work.
     
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    Well.. I reckon it's a beaut (but I REALLY dig on things framed like that). My only suggestion is photoshop out the graffiti - it's distracting and doesn't add to the "story" of the shot (IMHO). Nice shot. Nice work.
     
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    Think this is awesome! Nice shot. Great composition, I love the framing. Only thing that I would like to see different it to crop a little bit off the the bottom. maybe right up to the bottom log/board in the window sill. Good job.
     
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    Thanks for the replies. crystalview......here is the cropped version. I've had it since I took the original. I like it better too. The reason I didn't use it was to try and minimize the distraction from the blown out sky.
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