Wine - First post here

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  1. Artemis

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    Oki, this is the first image ive submitted here, and it is'nt my best, was just quite proud of it.

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    I may have a black and white version made soon.

    And if you want to take the picture and edit it, be my guest.
     
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    Huh.. I like it Arti. Odd composition and DOF - but it all works wonderfully.
     
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    Finally someone else that likes to take photos at crazy angles! Actually I think I do that because I can never get the horizon straight - If you can't beat them, join them :mrgreen:

    One other comment - you have a really dark patch just behind the neck of the bottle. I think the photo would be much improved if you removed it.
     
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    Well, to be honest, this was a Im bored so im just gonna shoot randomly shot :p

    As for the angle...Ive always tried to do the odd angels, but never had a good subject for it.

    And dark patch...how could I remove it without ruining the whole picture?
    Clone stamp can only do so much :(
     
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    Oki, here it is in black and white...which one do you like best? colour or black and white...I then may try and take it to a nearbye cafe and see if theyd like to put it up...:)

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    Arti, bw is much better!

    No, I wasn't suggesting you should clone it out. I was suggesting that you might try and take it again without the dark stuff in the background.
     
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    :( can't, it was a one time shot :( Hmm....guess itll have to stay.

    Thanks for the comments Trigger!
     
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    What type of frame would it look best in? Wooden or black?
     
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    Black frame ill go with a black frame...
     
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    Sorry arti, but I'm no good at framing. I'm sure black will be fine though.
     
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    I prefer the black and white version. However, I find the jar of relish and the citrus juicer in the background very distracting.
     
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    excellent shot arty! b&w with black frame!!!
     

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