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craig

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Promotional piece that I shot for myself. Let me know what you think. ƒ29 @ 1/60th focal length = 48mm Cloudy +2 WB. 30 second retouch. I will have to spend some more time on this one. Kind of a work in progress.

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seems a tad warm. the greens are a little orange. the bottles seem really over exposed, while the flowers are a (tiny) bit dark. also, i'd like it a bit more if the flowers at the bottom weren't cut off.
i like the way it's composed though.
 
much better. a bit more detail and clarity here.
 
I'd use a silver reflector behind each bottle, long thin black flags to model the sides of the bottles better, and more light on the produce, less on the wine, get it to a slightly darker color, here's one I shot as a test for a client:
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here's an overall view of the setup, for reference:

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Notice how the black cards create a darker line, delineating the bottle contours.

erie
 

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