" Winter Barn..."

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  1. New England Moments

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    a Barn in Vermonts Northeast Kingdom, to simple ?



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    Not much you could do about it, but I think I would like it better with full cloud cover or no cloud cover. Something about that distracts me.
     
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    Well what you say makes some sense, because the blue above the clouds (upper) actually divides the frame into fourths.. and possibly this would cause an eye distraction,, perhaps a crop into the cloud itself would be more pleasing..

    Thanks!
     
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    Yeah, I agree, a crop on the right side work.
    Love your photos NEM. I always look forward to them.
     
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    nice barn... again. Good exposure with the snow, perhaps a smal contrast boost is needed
     
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    elsaspet.. Thanks, nice compliment, I appreciate that!

    nagoshua... Probably wouldn't hurt for a bit more pop! Thanks
     
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    yes, it looks nice, but something bothers me.. not sure what yet. it looks a bit out of balance for me, maybe because of the snow which has not much structure, and then the upper 3/4 have lots of detail and colour.

    maybe just too much sky and not enough snow for my eyes.
     
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    no not too simple - just a nice clean picture and you have done the snow very well. I think I would crop a touch off the left as I feel the barn is too central.
    Well done
     
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    shadows and highlights nicely done... crop into the clouds and as much to the left and you will have an excellent composition as well.
     

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