wooo hooo my ad!

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  1. mentos_007

    mentos_007 The Freshmaker!

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    !!!! you won't belive but something like you see above will be published in a students magazine ( which is in English )!!! It's and advertisement of... me! and my photos! A friend of mine designed such an adverb and ask if I want it published somewhere for free coz I'm a student... WOOT!

    I'd be glad if you cheked this... if there's no error and so... but I hope it's fine... ok...so who's keen on the offer? only $20 for big 40x30 cm print! with author's sig :D hehehee
     
  2. Antarctican

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    THAT IS AWESOME, Mentos! Nice ad, and I hope you get tons of responses.
     
  3. Meysha

    Meysha still being picky Vicky

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    Do we put an "an" before 'unique'??? it looks a little strange there - yes i know about the whole 'before a vowel' rule... but I never ever say an unique... it's always a unique. But maybe that's just coz of my accent.

    The last sentance "Would you like to show your boss your full of art office" sounds a bit funny with the 'full of art office' bit. Maybe you should try - "Would you like to show your boss your office filled with art?"

    And the sentance where you say "Choose a picture you want to have developed" is fine... but it's got a lot of words in it. You could say it a lot simpler like "Choose a picture you would like developed" (or even printed).

    What does everyone else think?
     
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    Andrea K TPF Noob!

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    You touched upon everything I was going to mention.

    Good luck Mentos!!!!!!!! The ad looks awesome!
     
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    nice ad! and good luck! :thumbup:
     
  6. mentos_007

    mentos_007 The Freshmaker!

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    thank you for comments!! I'll call him and ask to correct those :) I hope somebody will buy a print...
     
  7. lostprophet

    lostprophet No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    so how long will it be till you earn your first million?? ;)
     
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    Yeah, we say "a unique" because the u is pronounced as "you", which begins with a consonant sound instead of a vowel sound. ;-)

    But still, nice-looking ad!
     
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    Way to go!!!!!!!
     
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    congratulations Alexandra!
     
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    looks very cool, I like it!
     

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