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  1. jadin

    jadin The Mad Hatter

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    inspired by azkul

    I like it, but I'm not sure if I need to do more to it or just leave it as is. Was going for a golden rectangle type thing.

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    Corry Flirtacious and Bodacious Supporting Member

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    That is pretty cool, but...could you explain it a little? For starters, what is it? :)
     
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    jadin The Mad Hatter

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    Well it started out as a collage, but everything I tried wound up too busy. So they it developed into what you see above. The lights are strong; used for illuminating a bridge. the numbers are from a ship's rudder, shows how submerged the hull is.
     
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    I like it. Don't know what the heck I would do with it (besides stick it in a portfolio or summat) but I like it.
     
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    I like it to. I think you wanted the line to show through the lights. But have you tried making them more solid?
     
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    Karalee hOtLiPs!

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    Actually I really enjoy this image, its almost cartoonish.

    Good stuff :thumbsup:
     
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    I've no idea what it is but I like it :)
     
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    I'm having trouble indentifying the "Golden rectangle" pattern. Can you point it out for me?

    Thanks
     
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    I like the color and lighting you have here. There is something about where you placed everything which gives the picture and interesting abstract design to it.
     

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