Yellow Rose

Discussion in 'Macro Photography' started by helloyo53, Oct 23, 2009.

  1. helloyo53

    helloyo53 TPF Noob!

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    Feedback is much appreciated.

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    It looks a little soft. I cant pick out a focal point. But I love the vivid color!;)
     
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    Like said before it needs more sharpness. I think you could do a little in post to sharpen the stamen and keep the nice velvet texture of the petals. Also maybe burn in what ever is catching light in the bottom right. I think it is the edge of a leave, but by eye is drawn to that. Now that I look again, I would push both bottom corners back a little since you are not seeing enough leaf for it to be subject.

    I love the nice soft detail of the petals and the little hints of yellow in the background. I would like to see this larger since it's all the little variations in the petals that hold my eye.
     

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