yellow sandals

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  1. a.rodgers

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    CC please

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    I think I would try to bring out the yellow a bit more
     
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    Nice picture; I just wish it was composed a little better. Slightly too close to the edges, and I don't like how they overlap.
     
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    thank you both for the advice! ill have to keep working on my composition!
     
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    Im not liking that line at the bottom.
     
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    Here is me just playing around with the photo. I started out by doing a tighter crop then I brought the yellow out more and to finish it off I added a border...hope you didn't mind :)

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    Like the crop, here's my take.

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    thanks for the edits, i like the crop! i think white's looks better though, im not a fan of the super bright yellow
     
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    I might be crazy, but I think I like the original composition better than the crops. The flip flops already seem a bit lonely and abandoned, and I think the extra space just helps that out.
     
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    crop = better:thumbup:
     
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    I have those same shoes from Old Navy!

    1 dollar flip flops? haha
     
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    haha yeah! those are the same ones. as you can see, mine are pretty worn out already
     

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