Yes another noob.. C&C Please

Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by Jase3040, May 29, 2009.

  1. Jase3040

    Jase3040 TPF Noob!

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    You forgot the [ at the beginning of your string.

    My thoughts are that it is overexposed and washed out in the foreground. Composition doesn't look too bad though for somebody new to the "game".
     
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    bigtwinky No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    There are some hotspots in the sand, which make it so white it loses its detail.
    Your horizon line is crooked.

    The sharpness looks good and I also like the colour saturation

    The picture is good, but the subject matter is a bit dry.
     
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    boy would i rather be sitting there than here.

    did you happen to do some sharpening to it?...i feel like im seeing a small halo around the tree.
    couple blowouts in the sand as well.

    overall, a very pleasant shot.
     
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    Thank you. I see what you mean about the horizon. Ill try and fix it. As far as the hotspots in the sand, what do you mean and any tips on fixing it.
     
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    hotspots or blowouts are areas that are pure white with no detail in them...usually meaning that that area of the photograph was over exposed.

    if you expose for the brightest areas of your composition, the blowouts will likely be nonexistent...
     

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