Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by newrmdmike, Jun 24, 2007.
serious critiques welcome.
I don't see anything that i think could make it better. Of all the photos from that shoot this is deff. the best. I wish you had put this up when you shot it.
hi Mike... Well by the comment above, it appears you did a series of this type shot/ theme ?? I didn't see any of the others so can only comment on this??
I'm still trying to figure out how the subject got out of focus?? Slow speed and he moved ?? I mean he's only out of focus from hands up ?? Baffled ?
but anyway, not knowing what your theme was , or what you are trying to convey its hard for me to comment.. Its an interesting shot, seems a little strange... I guess you set it up like this...
The shot seems to lack contrast, no real pop to it... but again, maybe thats what you were after, so I better leave this alone...
The shor or the idea has potential when the focus issue is resolved. I doubt that you would try to duplicate it.
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