you failed...

santino

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Just an experiment...

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comments are welcome
 
I like it. Were you trying to place the ash tray in the main position of a "Golden Rectangle"?

Great composition.
 
I do not get the title. You are definitely on to something. I would try a tighter f stop and move the art away from the background to lessen the effect of the shadow.
 
santino said:
yeah, I was. thx for your comments

I would have submitted this one in the Critique Thread if it had been mine. We rarely ever get to see attempts at the GR (Golder Rectangle) and you've done it well.
 
canonrebel: Maybe you're right, didn't see the GR (I'm kinda new in here :) )

craig: I admit the title's kinda strange, it says that you had to drink that stuff and eat but you didn't, so you failed :D
 
Jadin, you have a very effective illustration. For a more definitive GR, consider adding at least 2 elements placed on the arc in the left 2/3's of the composotion that would compliment the main subject.
 

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