you'll like the last pic i'm sure ;)

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  1. rhinoryan

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    just 2 pic's for c+c if u could be bothered.... the 3rd pic is an early thanks for the c+c ;)

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    #1- Really cute dog but by focusing on the nose the eyes are soft. Focus on the eyes or use more DOF to keep all in focus. The background is distracting and looks oversaturated on my monitor. Perhaps some fill on viewer's right? The composition seems awkward to me with the horizon splitting the image 50/50. You cut off the puppy's right paw.

    #2- Cool pic but the surfer is soft and slightly overexposed surf? Burn it in a bit?

    #3- Definitely need to move closer and fill the frame. Or better yet, let me do it. ;)
     
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    thanks for your comments, here's another pic of the same girl for you!
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    i think we need more...lol
     
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    m0ar pics please....
     
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    i shoot alot of surfing so i do have a few shots of girls on the beach.... do you really want more?
     
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    absolutely. You have a true eye in the camera.
     
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    indeed, more! lol
     
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    pic quality isn't that good but i just love the fact that its a nice looking girl with a nice looking camera!
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    Great action in #2! The first one is a nice shot, but maybe a shallower depth of field would improve it.
     
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    she is one of the best photographers I have ever seen. Very talented.
     
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    hahaha i actually chatted with her for about half an hour, thought i was getting somewhere untill...... her bf came out of the surf and i knew him haha
     

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