Your Opinion Please

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  1. vandecarr

    vandecarr TPF Noob!

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    Please give me your thoughts on this portrait. What can make it better, etc...

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    Thanks,
    Mike V
     
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    vandecarr TPF Noob!

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    Here is one more for you to critique:

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    Thanks,
    Mike V
     
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    his face looks a little hot on the light side, but other then that its very good. well composed, features are nice and sharp. its nice other then it being a bit on the bright side
     
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    Nice. On #2, I'd crop so that there was a tad more space on the right side between the face and the edge of picture, but that's just nit-picking.
     
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    Lighting is good in both. The aquamarine eyes are a personal taste.
    Shame he never really relaxed.
     
  6. vandecarr

    vandecarr TPF Noob!

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    I did a slight color enhancement on the eyes, but that is the natural color.

    My biggest regret is forgetting to put back up the reflector and I wasn't using a tripod because he was moving around alot.

    It was shot using a soft box and the kid wouldn't relax because he wanted to watch wrestling and didn't want to be taking pictures.

    All in all it worked out pretty well.

    Thank you very much for all your comments and tips.


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