Your Smile Makes Me Melt

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  1. PrecociousEmber

    PrecociousEmber TPF Noob!

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    alllrighty...

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    What does everyone think of this? Her neck is washed out, i think. Other than that, I'm really proud of this. This is one of the first portraits I've ever taken seriously. So lemme know..
     
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    mentos_007 The Freshmaker!

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    very nice... I'd play with a DOF a bit to have the background completely blurred but it is nice :)
     
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    Corry Flirtacious and Bodacious Supporting Member

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    The lights and shadows are too harsh, in my opinion, and the glasses have got to go. The focus also seems to be a bit off...it's softer on the face, and sharper on her leg. Other than that, not a bad first try.
     
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    PrecociousEmber TPF Noob!

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    well.. this wasn't a "photoshoot" because we were just out taking pictures... but then i tried to take some better ones of her... so it was spur of the moment, so she had on what she had on. i agree about the dof. and i see what you're saying about the focus.

    thanks, guys
     
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    she does have a great smile and i agree with everyones comments. i also believe it to be a bit overexposed.
     

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