Zion NP - C&C

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  1. mosu84

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    Cliche shot of the Watchman. Would appreciate any C&C

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    I think your greens might be a little too green. Also, you have dust spots center top of the image.
     
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    Thanks. I was in the middle of posting a version with the spots removed when you posted this. I'll try and tone down the greens a little.
     
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    I think it's great and the greens work great for me. The only thing I'm not loving is the sky. For one, it's a little noisy/grainy, and second, it's not nearly as vibrant as the rest of the picture (obviously not your fault). You might run a little selective NR on the sky though to see if it cleans up a bit. Otherwise, great photo.
     
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    Great shot. I have no problem with the amount of green. Only problem, like mentioned above, is the noise in the sky.
     
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    Looks like it's overprocessed? Would like to see the original.

    Composition is good. Circular polarizer would help with getting the reflection out of the stream unless this is taken at an angle that is too wide for polarizers.
     
  7. mosu84

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    Thanks for the feedback everyone. I took another shot at it tonight; this time with a 3-stop ND filter. The photo above was an exposure blend of two photos. This time I edited a single exposure.

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