Zombiefest Julio De Leon

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  1. Silver.Winged.Demon

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    what do u think?
     
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    In the second one, the line on the wall is kind of weird/distracting.

    And, the "gore" looks more like he missed his mouth with his PB&J sandwich...

    Other than those things, I can dig these.
     
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    I'm kinda on the fence about these photographs; I don't dislike them but I don't particularly like them... I've been contemplating these for a couple minutes now and here's what I've come up with a) they don't look completely sharp. b) personally I'd like to see some more eye contact, or at least a little more intensity from the subject. c) I'm not sure a light background is working for me with these d) a little more dramatic lighting to give the photos a little more dimension.. I'm thinking a headshot, angle the camera, eyes to camera, rembrandt lighting on a darker background and bingo.. This series has got me thinking of a thousand different poses and lighting that'd give it that extra little "oomph". Another session with a little more variety and we may have a winner.
     

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