I like the look of the first shot.
Like dxqcanada, the second one does nothing for me personally.
The third one seems flat, and just too much dead space. The skyline is too low in my opinion, and with it being a silhouette of the skyline, there needs to be deth and shadows other places, but...
Well, for better or worst I came up with an idea.
The first attempt was too busy. To much in the scene, to many different light sources, it just wasn't what I was envisioning. The second attempt is what I'm going to go with.
Storytelling: Self Portrait