You really don't know what flat lighting is do you? The first shot is far from flat. It needs the light to be a little higher and some more fill but flat it is not!
Nice start.
Soften the straight edge along his back.
Move them up just a tad in the frame.
Use a consistant opacity for the font and change fonts to something more romantic/personal.
Reduce the images opacity to about half of what you have here and then play to see what you like...
Place the light at approx. 45 degrees to her and bring in a reflector. Look at how the light looks for both light and reflector and practice, practice, practice! Meter your lights or if you don't have a meter then chimp and check your histogram.
Thanks everyone, your comments are very much appreciated.
It's all about the eyes NJ. Thanks pal!!
There is a backdrop. My wife and daughter in law are holding up a banket to block the kitchen stove. LOL
I haven't been around on the forum much lately but couldn't resist dropping in to show off my first Grandchild. She's almost three months old. Taken at a patio door with a reflector to camera right.
Try the lighting at 45 degrees, at a height to get light into both eyes. Not easy in a self portrait.
Because you were partially out of the shot I cropped you down the middle for a little more dramatic look.
I added some contrast, got rid of some wispy hair and softened it a little.
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