I like these...However, I always tell my couples "when kissing look into each others eyes and DON'T PUCKER!"
It sounds crazy but it works. That gets rid of the fish look and helps. Try catching them right before the lips connect.
She's cute. Really strong features. I think what sideburns sees is how her hairline and brows are almost too perfect? Add a little texture, maybe?
Do you shoot a variety of portraits? Or are these your specialty?
Well, back to the drawing board.
I guess that I'll give this to mom and dad on the house. And I need to research and see what else being offered to proud parents nowadays!
Perhaps, a different angle? No wait...an addition.
GOT IT! Off to work.