Ya, but you seem to have made this all about you.
I agree with tirediron that this might have been a better shot if left in color. Can't know...
Decisions made that might have been incorrect are now baked in to the current jpeg. Working with that as a starting point makes no sense.
Is the original file posted somewhere? Reprocessing the conversion gets you nowhere fast.
As someone who currently shoots Olympus m43, Nikon Dx, and Nikon FX, I see the following:
m43 + 45mm = 90mm EQ angle of view (2X crop factor)
I think this is fine. Color, exposure, focus are all spot on. The crop is not standard and could have been applied with more thought to...
Been a while since I've seen anyone smoking in a cafe. Quit 16 years ago. This shot makes me miss it a bit. Does that count as critique? ;)
I think the bright windows pull the attention of the viewer away from the subject too much. I'm not sure if there was a reason not to, but...
I used to always shoot RAW with my Nikons and process in Capture NX2, with additional processing in Photoshop. I've had to move away from that...
This is great. Maybe less vignette, but still great.
Not sure you were looking up either.
Because there are no blacks and whites - just greys.
How would you fix that?
Well yes, that is "lighter", but at the expense of shadows and highlights:
Your lack of post processing ability is holding back your...
Really loving you IR stuff. Always wanted to convert one on my cameras, but the process to convert confuses the sh*t out of me. What cameras...
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