I actually like the lighting better on the original, I think you lost some of the detail on the tree to the right with the adjustment. Beautiful...
Great pic! If I had to offer a suggestion, it would be to crop it a bit closer to make the father and son stand out a bit more.
Agree with the crop suggestion but because the man's watch is distracting to me. Great pic though, I love the feeling it creates.
1. I agree with the others re more contrast. I like the comp though
4. Love the lighting with this one. Especially the colour of the sky.
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