1 more senior pic practice C&C please

[sarisotta_21]

Heres another one that I'd like some advice on..Thanks!

 

[tirediron]

C&C per req:

Definitely some exposure challenges with this image. Some fill light image right would definitely have helped to preserve detail in her hair and top. Her expression and pose rather make me think that you snuck up behind her and shouted "Smile" when she didn't want to have her picture taken.

Just my $00.02 worth - your mileage may vary.

~John

 

[Bitter Jeweler]

Try framing/cropping your subject in a flattering way. The area of her body is 3-4 times that of her head in your image. Your goal as a photographer is to draw attention away from her weight, and draw attention to her pretty face.

 

[sarisotta_21]

aww I see what your saying that does look alot better!! Thanks!

 

[Derrel]

GO to this page, and watch some of the free DVD/seminar video clips.
fridayphotoschool.com

Pay special attention to the Top 10 Posing Tips, by Rick Ferro. In that free sample clip, you will see the shoulder problem your photo has mentioned...