2 little girls...first paid session!

[NateWagner]

I hope you don't mind, but, because you said your photos are ok to edit I went ahead and put a few touches on it in lightroom.

My personal opinion is in line with what the other poster said before that you should just give them the images you took and chalk it up to experience. a good number of the photos posted were rather soft, and the exposure was off. The one I modified was very green among other things.

With some work I think you will definitely get there, just get out there and keep practicing.